First Rough Cut Feedback from Becky Young

After uploading the rough cut of the music video, I asked Becky to have a look at it and I also asked her to comment on the video and tell me what she thought of it. She managed to give a lot of feedback and tell us what we should think about changing.

Becky thought overall it was a good idea, however, she thought that I could cut in down a lot more and the cuts could be a bit more quicker. She also thought that on some parts where she is just looking blank and not singing that I could shorten it and add in another shot to make it more interesting. Finally, she thought that when I add in the Junction half of the footage, I could add it on the end like I intended but also put in earlier on so that it is a bit more interesting and cuts between her journey and the Junction Gig.